Ray, I'd say retry that line about R&D... It sounds a bit presumptuous. Maybe something along the lines of "Why choose Worcester for secondary production facilities, and can you share anything on the location of this facility?" As far as the supply chains, it might be just a bit cleaner to ask it like "What sort of supply lines are being established to supply production?" Just my two cents...
daylight4449 wrote:Ray, I'd say retry that line about R&D... It sounds a bit presumptuous. Maybe something along the lines of "Why choose Worcester for secondary production facilities, and can you share anything on the location of this facility?" As far as the supply chains, it might be just a bit cleaner to ask it like "What sort of supply lines are being established to supply production?" Just my two cents...Fair enough, I agree. I will update the e-mail to incorporate your suggestions.
Probably send it this evening.